I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 24 July 2020
Cats or dogs
What animal do you like better Cats or dogs? For me I like both (because i don't want to hurt there feelings) I love both of my animals so much to the moon and back.
Dogs,
Dogs are friendly,protective and jumpy the Positive things about dogs is they can lick your grazed knee or something to make it better, You can teach them tricks,they can seance when you are sad and give you cuddles,Happy most of the time, They take you for exercise when you have to walk them.Now the negative things about dogs. Having to clean up there poo,They can shake,jump mud or water,You have to bath them and they shed all on you hands when there wet.
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Hello Lyla, it’s Breeze here. I commented on your blog last term. Well I chose to comment on this blog post because I love both cats and dogs and I can’t choose between them. In you blog post I loved how you said “I love my animals from the moon and back.” I like how you added a statement about dogs but I have a question. Is there a reason why you didn’t write a statement about cats? I hope to comment on your blog again in the future.
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Kia ora Lyla, my name is Ben and I’m a year eight at Paihia School. I think your post is well done and there’s a nice photo. Personally I like cats more because they aren’t so reliant on humans, they comfort me more than what dogs do and they’re cute. What’s your favourite animal? Goodbye.
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