I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Lyla it’s Breeze, I like your blogpost about maine coon cats because before I read your blogpost I didn’t know what maine coon cats were. I also like your blogpost about maine coon cats because it reminded me of our cats. I like how you added that maine coon cats have really long hair. I also like the pictures you added. Do you have a maine coon cat? Keep up the good work. Ka kite!
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Kia ora Lyla it’s Breeze, I like your blogpost about maine coon cats because before I read your blogpost I didn’t know what maine coon cats were. I also like your blogpost about maine coon cats because it reminded me of our cats. I like how you added that maine coon cats have really long hair. I also like the pictures you added. Do you have a maine coon cat? Keep up the good work. Ka kite!
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