Friday, 9 April 2021

Electric eel's!


For another reading task we had to write about Electric eel's! Hope you like it!
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous9 April 2021 at 11:52

    Hey Lyla! My name is Grace and I am from Paroa school on the West coast! I really like this post it is very interesting and nice to know some more facts about electric eels. To be honest I would never want to be bit by one of them! How long did it take you to make this post? And to be BTB (better than before) you could maybe add what normal eels are like and add the differences!
    You did a good job!
    From Grace

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  2. Anonymous9 April 2021 at 12:04

    hey this is really cool i dident know they lived for 100 yearsin the wild thats awsome i like the pics they are cool how the eals dident run away but how do they eat insects if there in water i would like to know keep up the good work
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  3. Anonymous21 May 2021 at 11:51

    Hello Lyla! I'm Lucy from Paroa School
    This piece of work is very imformative, but it would be better if you added some more facts. I already knew that longfin eels could live to around 100, but I didn't know electric eels could. Did you know that electric eels deliver around 600 volts which is enough to possibly kill a human, or leave them parazlized. I wouldn't want te be zapped by one of them!
    Lucy

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  4. Anonymous21 May 2021 at 11:51

    Hi Lyla, Emma from Paroa school here.
    This immediately caught my eye when I saw the title!
    To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could put lots more information (For Example) Why do electric eel die after they breed?

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  5. Anonymous21 May 2021 at 12:06

    Hi Lyla! This is Clara from Paroa school. I really like your blod post and the facts of eels. I would really like it if you added more information so that I knew more about eels :) I like how you added photos to this, to show what they looked like.
    Goog job!

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