I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Lyla its Me Zoe I like how you added photos and the background choice is amazing it could be helpful if you added more info bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Lyla it's me Tereora,
ReplyDeleteI love your photos and your little bit of writing too. But maybe and some more things about her