Friday, 18 October 2019
Porirua
One day in the holidays my Oma,Mum and I went to Porirua North city in the mall. First we went and got a wheel chair for my Oma because she finds it hard to walk. Then we went to go to Gleason's I got a pair of black shorts from there. After that we went for a look around and we came across to cotton on and we got some more shorts that had lines down them the colour was dark blue with light brown lines. Then we went and we found Jay jays I got two tops they was tie-dyed with black and bleach that had Not Sorry on it. The other top had roses on it. After that we went to Kmart My Oma had to get some stuff and then we came a cross for a big canvas for a $1! Then we left Kmart and we were hungry so we went to the food court I got MacDonald's and my Oma got curry and my Mum got Chinese after that we went back into Gleason's and I got like a denim skirt but not denim it was like val-vert. After that we went home and that was the end of the trip to Porirua.
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Hi Lyla I like you blog two things that you might want to change is there are a few run on sentenses and you didn't put paraghraphs.
ReplyDeleteHi lyla it's Hamish. Nice job just needs some paragraphs, but over all great blog post!
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