I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tuesday, 29 October 2019
Weekend hanging out with Zoe
On Monday Zoe,mum,dad and I went to Paraparaumu. We went to look at fridges cause our fridge stop working. So mum and dad went into Harvey Norman and Zoe and I went to the warehouse cause we wanted to have a look around at the Halloween costumes. And looking at the crafts after that we were hungry so we went to get a sausage because they were outside the warehouse it was deli-shes. Then we were thirsty so we went to MC Donald's we got a frozen blue berry it gave us brain freeze so after that mum and dad were finished in Harvey Norman. So we went to paper plus and I got a drawing book. I also got a little container of crystals they were so pretty after that we got some bread rolls and went home.
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Hi Lyla
ReplyDeleteThat sounds nice going shopping with Zoe!!! I like sausages too. Yum! Maybe don't start the sentences with 'so and and' but overall good blog!!!!
Hey Lyla! That sounds like a fun day! deli-shes is actually spelt delicious :). I can honestly not remember the last time I went to the warehouse.
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