I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Lyla, my name is Mahana I am a year six at Paihia School. I liked your blog about animal habitats because I have made a presentation about animals too. Your presentation was really fun to watch/ read because of the colors and all the pictures you added were really cute to me. My favourite slide was 5 animals that live in the forest because jaguars are one of my favourite animals. What's your favourite animal?
Kia ora Lyla, my name is James. I am a year eight at Paihia School. I like your post because it is about the Animals. I like Animals they are cute and some animals are scary.do you like Animals.
Hi Lyla, my name is Ana and I’m a year 7 in Te Ngahere at Paihia school. I liked reading your post about animal habitats, I thought it was very interesting. I I really enjoyed your post. Also that I like the forest.
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Hi Lyla, my name is Mahana I am a year six at Paihia School. I liked your blog about animal habitats because I have made a presentation about animals too. Your presentation was really fun to watch/ read because of the colors and all the pictures you added were really cute to me. My favourite slide was 5 animals that live in the forest because jaguars are one of my favourite animals. What's your favourite animal?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lyla, my name is James. I am a year eight at Paihia School. I like your post because it is about the Animals. I like Animals they are cute and some animals are scary.do you like Animals.
ReplyDeleteHi Lyla, my name is Ana and I’m a year 7 in Te Ngahere at Paihia school. I liked reading your post about animal habitats, I thought it was very interesting. I I really enjoyed your post. Also that I like the forest.
ReplyDeleteDo you have an animal?