I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Lyla my name is Lily and I am a year 8 student from Paihia school. I really like your post about Commonality Key. I also like that you added pictures to make your post more interesting, I also add pictures to my blog to make it more interesting and to show my working out. Why did you choose to post about this?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Lyla my name is Lily and I am a year 8 student from Paihia school. I really like your post about Commonality Key. I also like that you added pictures to make your post more interesting, I also add pictures to my blog to make it more interesting and to show my working out. Why did you choose to post about this?
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