I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 18 September 2020
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Kia ora Lyla, my name is Jamie and I am a year eight student at Paihia School. I really like your post about the eel life cycle. It was very interesting to read. I like how you had photos instead of lots of words, it made it easier to read and enjoy. Did you enjoy learning about the life cycle of eels? Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lyla, it’s Breeze here. I found it really interesting reading your blog post about eel life cycles. I like how you added a google drawing because it made it easier to understand. Did you enjoy learning about the life cycle of eels? Keep up the good work.
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Hi Lyla, my name is Ana, I’m a year 7 in Te Ngahere.
ReplyDeleteI really like your post about an eel’s life cycle. I like how you had a lot of words it was so easy for me to read.
Did you enjoyed learning about the life cycle of eels?